The Dark Prophecy — “The Trials of Apollo” Series


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The Dark Prophecy by Rick Riordan has been reviewed by Focus on the Family’s marriage and parenting magazine. It is the second book in “The Trials of Apollo” series.

Plot Summary

After discovering the Grove of Dodona — a grove of ancient prophetic trees — in the woods at Camp Halfblood, former Greek god Apollo receives a prophecy instructing him to go to Indiana in search of another oracle. Before he departs, an acquaintance of Apollo’s, Leo Valdez, returns to Camp Halfblood. Leo had been missing for months after flying his bronze mechanical dragon to rescue his girlfriend, Calypso, from Ogygia — the enchanted island where she had been imprisoned for thousands of years. When Apollo fills Leo and Calypso in on what has happened at the camp over the past few months, they volunteer to fly to Indiana with him and help complete the quest.

When the three friends land in Indianapolis, a woman named Nanette greets them. The friends are wary and attempt to leave. She states that they can’t go until they have been welcomed properly and makes a phone call, stating that Apollo has arrived and that she needs back up. Calypso attempts to punch the woman, but breaks her hand on Nanette’s metal face. Apollo then realizes that the woman is actually a creature called a blemmyae disguising herself as a human. Blemmyae are headless human-like monsters, whose faces stretch across their chests and abdomens.

Nanette states that she is arresting the three friends in the name of the Triumvirate — a group of three immortal evil Roman emperors that are planning to overthrow the gods by cutting them off from all their sources of prophecy. An army of blemmyae begins approaching Leo, Calypso and Apollo, but the three friends are able to outsmart the creatures and escape on a nearby bulldozer. They don’t make it very far, however, before they are cornered in a plaza by the blemmyae. They are beginning to lose hope when an older gray-haired woman with a crossbow begins fighting off the blemmyae. She instructs Leo, Calypso and Apollo to follow close behind her, saying that she will take them to a secret fortress called the Waystation.

The woman introduces herself as Emmie, and once everyone is safely inside the Waystation, she explains that she and her partner, Josephine, were former Hunters of Artemis — a group of maiden warriors serving Apollo’s sister, the goddess of hunting and the moon. When Jo and Emmie fell in love, they decided to leave the Hunters to build a life together. Artemis made them the caretakers of the Waystation, which is a magical haven for demigods and other magical creatures that need protection and a home.

Lately, however, their family of demigods has been slowly disappearing, including their adopted daughter, Georgina. Emmie and Jo decide that they should share their respective stories over dinner and come up with a plan. Leo, Apollo and Calypso explain that they have come on a quest to find an oracle. Emmie and Jo state that the oracle they are looking for is called Trophonius. It is located in a system of caverns outside of Indianapolis.

The armies of Commodus, a member of the Triumvirate, guard the caves. Jo and Emmie warn the three friends that the cave is dangerous. The supplicant must drink from two magical springs to prepare his/her mind before speaking with the oracle. The prophecy then must be extracted from the supplicant using a magical item called the Throne of Memory or the prophecy will remain fragmented in the supplicant’s head and drive the person mad.

Jo and Emmie’s 7-year-old daughter, Georgina, thought that she could find the missing demigods, who had been kidnapped by Commodus, if she got a prophecy from the cave, but since Jo and Emmie didn’t have access to the Throne, Georgie was driven mad. Then Commodus kidnapped the girl.

While Jo and Emmie are explaining this, they are interrupted by a crash from the rooftop. They go to investigate and return with Britomartis, the goddess of nets and the creator of the Waystation. She instructs Apollo and Calypso to free her griffins, which have been captured by Commodus. The female is with egg, and the goddess is worried about them. Apollo is reluctant, but Britomartis promises that if they bring back the griffins, she will help them infiltrate Commodus’ palace to free the other prisoners and steal back the Throne of Memory.

Apollo and Calypso agree, and Britomartis informs them that the griffins are being kept at the Indianapolis Zoo. Apollo and Calypso leave early the next morning so they can sneak into the zoo before it opens. Once inside, however, they realize that one of Commodus’ commanding officers, Lityerses, is guarding the train to the hidden griffin enclosure. They manage to get onto the train without being captured, but Lityerses knows where they are and is following them. The train takes Apollo and Calypso to a hidden enclosure filled with mythical creatures and torture devices. They realize that Commodus is planning to stage a huge gladiator-style tournament and is using this space to prepare the animals to fight. They realize that the captured demigods are probably intended as sacrifices as well.

Calypso and Apollo are able to open the griffin cage, but it takes them a bit too long to earn the griffins’ trust, and Lityerses catches up with them. Suddenly, however, Apollo’s old friend Meg appears and fights Lityerses. Apollo has not seen Meg since she revealed that she was Nero’s stepdaughter and had been helping him locate the Grove of Dodona. Meg tells Apollo and Calypso to escape with the griffins, but Apollo refuses to leave without her. Meg wounds Lityerses, and they all mount the griffins and fly back to the Waystation.

Apollo thanks Meg for rescuing him. He tells her that he doesn’t blame her for anything that happened at the Grove of Dodona. She was manipulated by Nero and didn’t understand what he was trying to do. Meg explains that she was coming to Indianapolis to try to stop the Triumvirate because she overheard Commodus’ plan to rechristen Indianapolis in his own honor and to celebrate the occasion by sacrificing countless animals and demigods. Apollo and Meg agree to work together.

Once everyone is safely settled at the Waystation, Britomartis returns. She tells Apollo that there is a secret entrance into Commodus’ palace through the sewer system, and she recommends that he take Meg and Leo with him to rescue the prisoners and find the throne.

They rest that night and leave the next morning. The three friends find the entrance fairly easily, only having to sneak by one monster on the way in. They find the prisoners’ cells and are outraged at Commodus’ cruelty. The prisoners have been starved and mistreated, but all of the former occupants of the Waystation, including Georgina, are alive.

Apollo, Meg and Leo free the prisoners and decide that Leo should guide the escapees back to the Waystation, while Meg and Apollo search for the Throne of Memory. They find the throne fairly quickly, but on their way out of the palace, Meg abruptly turns around and says that there’s something important in the other direction. Apollo reluctantly follows her back into the palace, and they find themselves in the middle of the arena where Commodus is holding a dress rehearsal for the next day’s sacrifices. In the center of the arena, tied up and hanging from the ceiling is Meg’s companion Peaches, the grain spirit.

Commodus greets Apollo and Meg and challenges them to a gladiatorial contest in order to save Peaches. Later in the dress rehearsal, he plans to sacrifice Lityerses for allowing Apollo and Calypso to escape with the griffins. Meg and Apollo accept his challenge, having no other choice, but it quickly becomes apparent that they are outmatched.

Suddenly Leo breaks through the roof, riding his bronze dragon. Leo, along with Jo, Emmie and a few Hunters of Artemis, are able to rescue Apollo, Meg and Peaches. Apollo frees Lityerses as well and convinces Jo and Emmie to bring him along.

Back at the Waystation, Jo and Emmie immediately attempt to use the Throne of Memory to extract the prophecy from Georgina. Rather than an ordinary prophecy, however, the Trophonius addresses Apollo directly, commanding him and Meg to come to the oracle’s cave at first light. The oracle explains that unless Apollo comes and receives a prophecy of his own, Commodus will succeed in rechristening Indianapolis and in destroying the Waystation.

Jo and Emmie are confident that Commodus will not be able to find the Waystation, but Lityerses explains that Commodus had trackers placed on the griffins before they were rescued and is planning an assault on the Waystation. Jo, Emmie and the demigods plan to stay and fight while Apollo goes to consult the Oracle of Trophonius.

Apollo and Meg leave the next morning to travel to the Bluespring Caverns, where the oracle is located. They search for the two magical springs, since Apollo must drink from both to prepare his mind. They find them at the entrance of one of the caves and conclude that the oracle must be inside. Apollo drinks from the springs and immediately forgets who he is and why he is there. Meg leads him into the cave, but a lake infested with water moccasins blocks their path.

In his delirious state, Apollo wanders into the lake. In an attempt to save him from the snakes, Meg sings a song about her deepest fears and failures. (She had seen Apollo successfully calm animals this way in the past.) In doing so, however, she opens herself up to the oracle to receive a prophecy, even though her mind was not prepared through drinking the springs.

Meg immediately collapses and begins to shake. Apollo knows that the oracle will kill Meg if he does not intervene, so he attempts to resuscitate her mouth to mouth and ends up sharing the weight of the prophecy with her.

Once the prophecy ends, Meg is left unconscious. The oracle tells Apollo that there are blemmyae at the entrance of the cave preparing to kill Apollo and Meg and destroy the cave with explosives. The oracle requests that Apollo ensure the cave’s destruction if he and Meg defeat the blemmyae, so that no one can use the prophecies for their own purposes like Commodus has. Apollo carries the unconscious Meg out of the cave with him. He encounters three blemmyae and knows that he will not be able overpower them.

He tricks one of the blemmyae into setting the explosives deeper in the cave, knowing that she will not have time to get back out before the cave collapses. Apollo then defeats the other two blemmyae and heads back to the Waystation to see how his friends are faring.

The battle is almost over by the time Apollo arrives, but Commodus is still fighting and has managed to recapture Georgina. He uses her as leverage against Jo, Emmie and the rest of the residents of the Waystation. Apollo arrives to find a standoff.

Apollo threatens to reveal his true godly form and burn Commodus to a crisp if the emperor doesn’t release Georgina. Apollo is simply bluffing, as he shouldn’t have the power to do this in his mortal state, but as soon as he makes the threat, Apollo feels a surge of power. He warns his friends to close their eyes as he reveals his godly form. Commodus is not burned up, but he is blinded by the blast. Emmie grabs Georgina, and Commodus charges in a blind rage. Commodus miscalculates and falls out of a window. When Apollo goes to see if he is still alive, the emperor has vanished.

The Waystation is safe and secure once more. Apollo places Meg on the Throne of Memory and receives a new prophecy instructing him to travel south with Meg to continue his search for the oracles. Meg recovers from the effects of the oracle within a few days, and they prepare for their new quest.

Christian Beliefs

Apollo gets lost by following the signs for a Christian bookstore called God’s Place. He complains that they need to be more specific about which god they are referring to.

Other Belief Systems

This story is set in a world where Greek and Roman gods (and gods from other pagan religions) exist and are active in the modern world. Apollo is a god that fell from Olympus and lost his immortality and godly powers. Apollo explains that the biggest threat to the gods is being forgotten and fading completely out of memory.

The gods are sustained by human myth and memory, so if no one remembers anymore, they can experience a type of death. Myth and memory are also what sustain the evil Roman emperors, but they are described as stuck in a twilight life, not fully dead or alive. Apollo speculates that Commodus must have escaped the afterlife through the Doors of Death, which were accidentally opened during a battle a few months prior. Apollo explains that mortals are unaware of the Greek gods and monsters in their midst because a magical force called the Mist obscures their vision.

Apollo remembers Emmie praying to him to save her from her father’s guards, who were trying to have her put to death. He saves her by turning her into a minor goddess. He explains that any god can make a god of lesser power than himself or herself, but it requires sacrificing some of their own divinity. A ghost lives with Jo and Emmie and communicates via a Magic 8 Ball. Apollo is shocked that he has never heard of a Magic 8 Ball since he is the god of prophecy and is familiar with every form of divination.

Trophonius, whose spirit eventually becomes the oracle, prays to his father, Apollo, to save his brother from death and take him instead. Since Trophonius’ brother was killed while they were committing a robbery, Apollo ignores his prayer, thinking they deserve whatever happens. When Trophonius summons Apollo to the cave of the oracle, he asks who Apollo will pray to for help. Apollo rebukes Trophonius for praying for the wrong thing. He states that Trophonius should have asked for wisdom beforehand, rather than a bailout after following his worst instincts.

Calypso is a sorceress, but since leaving her magical island of Ogygia, she has lost her powers. At one point, however, she pretends to hex Apollo and he plays along, collapsing and convulsing. This frightens away some of Commodus’ guards, who she also threatens to curse.

When Meg opens her mind to the oracle, Apollo explains that she is plunged into the primordial Chaos, which the Fates use to weave the future. He states that being exposed to that much pure possibility could vaporize a human.

Apollo encounters a descendant of an African god and explains to one of Artemis’ hunters that many pantheons of gods exist side by side in the world. He explains that there is more than one sun god, for example, and that all gods are different manifestations of the same truth.

Authority Roles

Meg’s stepfather, Nero, is abusive and manipulative. He blames all of his violent behavior on an alternate personality called the Beast. He warns Meg not to make the Beast cross. He tells her that the only way they can be a happy family again is for her to find and capture Apollo.

Jo and Emmie are kind and loving parents that are distraught at the disappearance of their adopted daughter and would sacrifice anything to keep her safe. They also take in demigods that have no home or family and give them a safe place to stay for as long as they need.

Britomartis, the goddess who created the Waystation, is a bit selfish and calloused. She states that the safety of her griffins must come before Georgina’s safety. She explains that her needs must take precedence since she is a goddess. She essentially forces Leo, Apollo and Calypso into helping her and the only thanks and reward she offers is another dangerous quest — infiltrating Commodus’ palace.

Apollo explains that he can’t keep track of all of the children he has fathered and that sometimes he doesn’t recognize them as his children until they reach adulthood. As a result, he is not the most involved or caring parent. He suspects that Georgina might be one of his children, but he cannot remember for sure and states that she already has all of the parents that she needs in Jo and Emmie. He also refuses to help his son Trophonius due to the man’s decision to rob a temple. Trophonius’ brother dies as they attempt to escape, and Trophonius blames Apollo.

Apollo had a close relationship with Commodus when he first became emperor. He explains that they bonded in part over having stern and powerful fathers who were always disappointed in their sons.

Profanity & Violence

The demigods occasionally use dang and gosh darn. They also replace profanities with the names of Greek gods and places, such as what the Hades. The demigods and other characters occasionally resort to name-calling, such as loser, idiot, dummy, worthless, fool, etc. Calypso calls Apollo a gloutos which he translates as butt, but with a cruder connotation. Apollo uses a–, referencing a donkey and calls his son a jerkwad.

Calypso attempts to punch Nanette’s face, but ends up hitting her metal head and breaking her own hand. Apollo reports hearing the cracking sound of her fingers breaking. Later she attempts to kick the blemmyae in the nose, but she just ends up breaking her ankle as well. Apollo sees her ankle bend and hears a loud pop. When Emmie rescues Apollo, Leo and Calypso, she shoots a blemmyae between the eyes with an arrow, and it crumbles into dust.

Emmie’s father flies into a rage when she breaks his finest jar of wine. He threatens to kill her. He sends an army of guards to chase after her when she flees, and they chase her off a cliff. The ghost that lives with Jo and Emmie is decapitated, and Apollo sees blood dripping down the ghost’s neck and chest. Britomartis’ idea of a joke is booby-trapping everything with landmines. Leo states that if one went off, they’d all die from the shrapnel. Apollo mentions a foxlike monster that could level cities, that fed on the blood of its enemies and that could rip apart an army of warriors.

A tunnel collapses on Trophonius’ brother, crushing his chest. He coughs up blood and then asks Trophonius to cut off his head once he dies, so the man that they were robbing wouldn’t recognize him and figure out that Trophonius was involved too. Apollo describes Trophonius pulling out his knife and laying it against his brother’s neck but changes topics before describing anything more graphic. Trophonius later states that he staggered through the wilderness for weeks with his brother’s blood on his hands.

Commodus kills a blemmyae with his poleax simply because he is bored. Commodus orders the execution of three of his warriors who had disappointed him. Lityerses beheads them with his sword. Apollo shoots one of Commodus’ warriors in the foot with an arrow. Apollo explains that Commodus has been baiting, starving and torturing the animals he wants to sacrifice when he rechristens the city. Lityerses attempts to behead Apollo, but Meg deflects Lityerses sword with two of her own. They fence for a bit before Meg and Apollo can escape. No one is seriously injured but Lityerses does manage to slice Meg’s thigh.

When Commodus was emperor in Rome, he held vicious gladiator fights. Apollo remembers Commodus standing in a pile of severed ostrich heads and other carcasses. Commodus also became paranoid and was preparing to execute senators, priests and even his mistress, being convinced that they were plotting against him. Apollo murders Commodus to save all of the people that Commodus planned to execute. He enters Commodus’ chambers in disguise, draws him a bath and then drowns him in it. Apollo remembers holding him down in the water until he stopped fighting.

The monster guarding the entrance to Commodus’ palace is a giant sea serpent. Meg stabs it in the eye, blinding it. The serpent wraps its body around her and begins to squeeze until Apollo manages to collapse a brick wall on it, forcing it to release her. Meg kills a blemmyae by slicing through its midsection. Commodus states that he will hang the dead bodies of the Waystation occupants on ropes from the ceiling.

In Commodus’ palace, Meg and Apollo stumble onto an arena filled with animals and gladiators fighting for their lives. An army of ostriches that have razor wires on their legs charges them. Apollo worries that he will not be able to decapitate the birds fast enough.

The ostriches veer around Apollo and Meg. Meg mounts one and charges the gladiators and other animals. Apollo shoots at and kills a Cyclops. Apollo dissolves some wolf-headed monsters with ammonia. Commodus threatens to burn Meg’s grain spirit Peaches to death.

Apollo convinces an elephant in the arena to throw a large helmet at Commodus in an attempt to crush him, but the emperor is not seriously injured. Commodus explains that he had killed the elephant’s mate in an attempt to get her to fight.

Commodus blames Lityerses for allowing the griffins to escape and his enemies to infiltrate the palace, so he threatens to slit Lityerses’ throat. When a Hunter of Artemis shoots an arrow at Commodus, he uses Lityerses as a human shield, and Lityerses gets shot in the thigh. Lityerses stabs the emperor in the neck with a sword. The emperor is not killed but bleeds profusely.

Apollo and Meg encounter creatures called yales that look like oxen, but have horns that are able to swivel and spin to pierce the bodies of their enemies. Meg has a flashback to the moment when she saw her biological father’s dead body. He had been repeatedly slashed across his gut with a knife. Some blemmyae threaten to rip off Apollo’s limbs and trample him into jelly. Peaches and some of his grain spirit friends devour a blemmyae like piranhas.

When Apollo returns to the Waystation after visiting the oracle, the battle is still in progress. He hits one of Commodus’ soldiers in the face with a ukulele, and the boy crumples to the ground. One of the Waystation’s occupants summons lightning to disintegrate several Cyclopes. The Hunters kill their enemies with bows and arrows.

A snake woman that Leo and Apollo rescued from Commodus swallows one of Commodus’ guards whole. Apollo sees several dead bodies on his way into the building. Commodus has one of his guards hold Emmie and Georgina at gunpoint. Apollo blinds Commodus with his godly power. Lityerses baits Commodus into blindly charging him, and the emperor falls out of a window.

Sexual Content

Jo and Emmie, two female Hunters of Artemis, fall in love, get married and adopt a child together. Britomartis offers to give Apollo a kiss, but he doesn’t trust her. Apollo has so many love affairs that he can’t remember all of the children he has fathered. It is implied that some of his lovers were married women, and some were men.

Calypso pulls Apollo behind a building with her to hide. Apollo thinks that being pulled behind a building by a beautiful woman would ordinarily have pleased him. But he feels Calypso is more likely to kill than kiss him.

Commodus and Apollo were lovers when the emperor was a teenager in Rome. Apollo comments on the emperor’s handsomeness and admits to being jealous of Commodus’ wife. They share a kiss, and Apollo notices that his breath smells like grapes. Apollo thinks that one of the demigods they rescue from Commodus is very handsome. He comments that the demigod wears a loincloth well.

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Additional Comments

Crude humor: there are occasional jokes about butts, getting kicked in the crotch, vomit, etc.

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